Hedges & Filler: Thirty Words Doing the Job of Five
Filler phrases (“in order to”, “due to the fact that”) pad sentences; hedges (“arguably”, “it could be argued that”, “fundamentally”) drain conviction from claims. Both are individually harmless and collectively deadening.
Why AI writes it: Hedging is the model's insurance policy — a softened claim is never wrong. Filler emerges from token-level fluency: the longer, smoother phrase is often the higher-probability path.
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Before & after
Before
It could be argued that, generally speaking, onboarding is arguably the most important phase.
After
Onboarding is the most important phase.
Before
In order to achieve growth, it is important to note that consistency is required.
After
Growth requires consistency.
How to fix it
- 1Cut the hedge and commit to the claim — or state the actual uncertainty with numbers.
- 2Compress filler: “in order to” → “to”, “due to the fact that” → “because”.
- 3Convert passive constructions to active ones with a named actor.
- 4Watch the empty intensifiers: actually, honestly, simply, truly rarely add meaning.
Related patterns
Frequently asked questions
▸Why are some hedges only removed at Concise intensity?
Words like “actually” and “honestly” are common in genuine human voice. SlopTrim marks them severity 1, so Balanced leaves them alone and only Concise auto-cuts them — and you can always keep any flag individually.